By Tousif Raza, 02 August 2020
In a weekly segment poetic discussion Kashmir young writers Association this week discussed a new created poem by a new young poet & writer. Kashmir young writers Association patron Mr Ranjoor Tilgami, Mr Manzoor Yousf, Mr Tousif Raza Rasikh Shahid a legend poet Aadil Ramzan participated in the discussion. The the critical analysis about the poem included the poetic technics used in the poem and the devices used in the poem were also discussed. The poem discussed was written by a little girl Mehvish Mir Mehak. The poem and some discussion notes are as follows
By Mir Mehvish Mehak
Translated by Tousif Raza
I was down as deep as ocean…!!!!
I’m unaware of why I’m called passive thinker.. !!! !!!
The night’s dark apathy is so deep but strange to me …!!!!
My disability to my sleep take me to painful past…..!!!
To be succeed besides all weaknesses…. !!!!!
I’ve stopped my hopelessness…!!!
To stand against the
rage and ramp is now my decision,,
Yes This is my intention…. !!!!!!
Manzoor Yousf in his discussion said “The poem is about to take human being from imagination to reality and encourage him to fight against the external opponents of life which stop to stand and run up towards goals, the poem is full of metaphors and smilies, it an ocean of encouragement in few lines “